BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYZING E-COMMERCE TRENDS AMONG CANADIAN BUSINESSES FROM 2015-2019

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The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The bar chart compares the percentages of businesses which had a part in making e-commerce buy in manufacturing in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
It is clear that the amount of commercial buying had improved over the 6-year period between 5 different industry in Canada, except the information & communications commerce which decreased in 2019 to just over 70%. The lowest percentage belongs to the construction industry in 2015, approximately 25%.The retail industry had the lowest amount of using this commerce about 30% to roughly 55% over the years as the same industry of wholesale which had about 25% to almost doubled in 60% from 2015 to 2019.
The highest amount of using e-commerce belongs to the information & communication in 2018 about 70%.
Overall, the bar chart shows that the percentage of using e-commerce industry has increased roughly over the 4-year period which gives this information that the industry has improved.