BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF UK EMPLOYMENT DATA FROM 1998 AND 2012

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The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The given pie charts are about employment of men and women in the UK in 1998 and 2012. The majority of employment was related to men in both years. The total number of employment are higher in 2012.
In 1988, the percentage of men which had full time work was 53% which devoted the majority percent. The next higher percent related to women had part-time work with 22%, then women with full-time work with 19%. The least proportion was 6% which was related to men with part-time work.
In 2012, similar to 1988, the men with full time work devoted the higher proportion. The second group was women which had full time work with 26%, which this percentage was higher than to 1988. The next group was women with part time work with a fifth, which approximately the same amount in the 1988. And similar to 1988,the percentage of men with part time work was least among other groups with 7%.
Finally, The proportion of men with full time work was higher among other groups and the men with part time work was the least percentage.