BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF SURVEY RESULTS ON MIGRATION TO CAPITAL CITY

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The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

This line graph provides information about four most important reasons of movement of people to tha capital city, between the time period of 2000 and 2015.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is easily apparent that moving for studying was the most important reason while immigrate because of adventure changed gradually from 2000 to 2015.
As regards the line graph, the highest point belongs to the study with almost 85000 people in 2015 whilst the lowest point belongs to the adventure reason with approximately 1000 people in 20000. In addition, these line graph illustrates the number of people who moved to the capital city increased significantly from a little over 50000 in 2010 to 850000 in 2015; however, the proportion of immigrant because of employment decreased steadily from 90000 in 2012 to almost 85000 in 2015. What is more, movement because of advanture and family was not significant from approximately 10000 in 2000 to 15000 and allitle over 20000 in 2015, respectively.