BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS OF CANADIAN WORKFORCE PERCENTAGES IN MAJOR INDUSTRIES - 1850 VS 2020

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The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The bar chart provides percentages of Canadian workers in top 5 industries manufacturing, services, agriculture/fishing, construction and energy/water in the years 1850 and 2020.
Overall, the difference between percentages for other major industries between the years 1850 and 2020 is considerable and also the Canadian workforce's wish to agriculture and fishing, showed a dramatically increase in this period.
The maximum difference between Canadian workers rate in these years, belongs to job title called services, while the minimum difference belongs to Energy/water. The major industry relates to water and energy became less favorite among Canadian workforce over these years.
Canadian workforce's decided to investigate on major industry services by passing the years from 1850 to 2020 meanwhile, the manufacturing experienced an almost huge decrease over the period. Being 3% higher employee in Construction also was another example of changing the intention and habits to experience a new career by Canadian workforce.