BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYZING PEOPLE'S MOTIVATIONS AND TIMELINES TO QUIT SMOKING

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The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The demonstrated charts mentioned five main reasons that people tend to give up smoking and the time of this happens.
The effect of smoking on health in general is the first reason among others by 71 percent directly and 37 percent of the reasons indirectly are related to health for instance risk of getting illnesses and another major factor is financial problems by 31 percent. other reasons are family pressure.
About the time we can see that 71 percent of smokers tend to give it up compared to 29 percent who do not want to quit smoking.35 percent of smokers want to quit it after 6 months and 21 percent of them after next year find this feeling, unfortunately just 12 % of them find the fact that they should give it up. So we found that most of smokers tend to quit it especially because of the financial pressure.