BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF OLYMPICS PARTICIPANT TRENDS OVER THE YEARS

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The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The diagrams show the number of athlete who participate in Olympics since it begun and according to gender how different gender attend in this tournament.
In the year 1924 when Olympics was hold, participants were around 3000 athletes. this number rise throughout the years by 1984 and hit the 6000 people. thereafter attendees number suddenly have grown . by the year 2012 reached to 11000 athletes.

At first the difference of participants had noticeable gap. Men always had more attendees than women.
as the chart shows in 1924 men attendees were less than 3000 but women had no share of this. In 1984 women participate in tournament and fill this gap by 2012. less than half of the participants were women.
In Conclusion this statistics illustrate, during these years, as world developed. it provide and facilitate situation for participants to join to Olympics. More importantly women could reached to the point that in number became almost equal to men.