BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF E-COMMERCE ADOPTION ACROSS CANADIAN INDUSTRIES (2015-2019)

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The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The bar chart gives information on proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases in five different section in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Looking from an overall perpective, information and communication filed comprises the highest proportion in contrast to construction section.
As the table shows, in 2015, the amount of business making e-commerce purchases in industry in Retail and construction were the least while in information filed and wholesale were higher with 60% and 40% respectively . Altough in three section namely retail, wholesale and information and communications there is not considerable growth between 2016 and 2017 , In the realm of manufacturing, there is a significant rise of 20% from 2015 to 2016 followed with a decline in the next year .
Up to 2017, all the sections have revealed growth in the proportion of business making e-commerce buy in industry except retail and information and communication which have excperienced a slight fall in 2019.