BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF CANADIAN WORKFORCE DISTRIBUTION IN MAJOR INDUSTRIES FROM 1850 TO 2020

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The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The given bar chart alustrates workforce of Canada in 5 seperate industries in 1850 and 170 years later in 2020.
Overall, its obvious there is a dramatic increase
in service industy. In contrast the water and energy industry has been witnessed no significant change.
The workforce in manufacturing, stayed at the top of all industries in 1850 which is about 36%. But it fall in to 9% around a dacade later. Also agriculture industry droped to 1% in 2020,however it was stayed at 22% in 1850. It can be observe that These twe industries decrease in term of workforce after a decade.
Canadian workforce in service catagory rased significantly and reach to 81%in 2020 which was 50% higher campared to 1850.there was a progress in construction catagory that was around 3%.energy industry's workforce was the lowest percentage among other 4 industries in 1850, and stayed at the same level in 2020.