BAND 5.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF ANNUAL EARNINGS OF CALGARY BAKERIES FROM 2000 TO 2010

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The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The line graph illustrates how much money the tree bakery which are located in Calgary including Amandine, Mari and bolo bakery earning in years between 2000 and 2010.the unites measured by $.
Overall, At first point start Bolo had the lowest income and Marie had the highest one. Amandine and Bolo bakery had a upward trend while Mari bakery had a downward trend from 2000 to 2010.
Mari and Amandine Bakery had 20000 $ and around 60000$ income at the first year respectively( year 2000)amandine bakery had a stable income to 2005 and it rose sharply to reach more than 100000 $ at the end of period. but Bolo bakery increased to 2003 by around 20000$ and after that it stay stable trend to 20006 around 400000$ . there was a sharp increase that followed by slight one to reach more than 60000 at 2010.
on the other hand, Mari Bakery fluctuated around 80000 until 2004 . there was followed by sharp decrease to 2006 and after a slight increase in next year it fall to around 40000 in 2010.