BAND 5.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS AND SUMMARY OF UK EMPLOYMENT STATISTICS FROM 1998 TO 2012

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The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

We want to speak about employment in the uk as you know in the past most of the company hire the men couse of the people who live in the past have a widly held myth that men should be work out of home and the women should ve stay at home and grow up tgeir children aslo above chart abvious my speak.as you can see in 1988 in full part time 53 persent that could be work in community consisted by men and only 19 percent women could be work full time but this issu about part time is completly diffrent wa see that 22 persent of weman worked part time and just 6 percent men worked part time.
Know i want to survey this issu in 2012
In full time filed:
47percent men hired and 26 percent framed of women.
In part time filed:
20 percent women worked part time and qbout men its about 7 percent.
If we want to quickly compar this tow years employment the men in 1988 was higher percentage allocated but in 2012 this percent was less in contrary this percent for women in 2012 is more than in 1988 but you know this percent in part of filed there isnt much difference between them.