BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: OVERVIEW AND ANALYSIS OF CANADIAN TAKEAWAY PREFERENCES & INDIAN RESTAURANTS (1960-2015)

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The charts below show the favorite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

I disagree with this statement that we should keep all the money we earn. Surveys indicate that the majority of government's budget comes from the taxes that people pay. Now what will happen if people don't pay taxes?
As it was mentioned a large part of government's budget uses in many field such as hospital services, municipal services and etc. And it is all relevant to our lives.
Another thing is that equipment or tools which helped you earn money, have been provided by government, like the place you have been working in. So in other words we must at least pay back the amount of money that helped us be in this position.
However, the things you obtain is the result of your hard work and it can be hart to give part of it to someone else.
Overall, not paying taxes is not a good idea and we should schedule a program that government utilize the money to serve its own people on a profitable way.