BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: COMPARISON OF NEWS ACCESS IN CANADA AND AUSTRALIA - MAIN FEATURES ANALYSIS

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 4.5

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

Our life more convenient, almost of us are becoming lazier. We have internet, not the only way to communicate with each other, but it has a lot of features which can active almost immediately. We become depend on it more. The examples for us is about Canada and Australia, you can see that the charts with color yellow and blue that are the time we spend to Online and watch TV. It takes a lot of our time but problaly we do not realize it - the thing is the most alarming this time.We have to look around our daily routines and do it reasonably. For our healthy future life and independece of the internet. We should write signs that makes us have more awarness about our problem now and post it on our school, work office , street, bus station, train station , gas station, supermarket and so on.