BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: COMPARING NEWS ACCESS METHODS IN CANADA AND AUSTRALIA

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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The 52% of Australian people watch online news in their phone. Canadian people often watch TV. they don't use radio that much . Print the news are not goob enough for both. If someone wants to publish the news can use tv on canada and online news in australia is the best way. I think people on Australia prefer the online news so we can creat a website or a weblog of news also the tv shows can be useful . We can hire someone for the tv show and another people we need and make a news show. Even We can use these in canada. we should don't think about the radio instead we can pay for the tv show. Its going to be perfect if we hire someone who can talk well and doesn't be shy and who old people like him or her. so the tv show in canada and a site or weblog in Australia.