BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: COMPARING 2015 AND 2040 ENERGY CAPACITY PROPORTIONS

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The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The pie charts indicate the proportion of different satisfcation’s levels of visitors from Ashdown museum the year before and after refurbishment also the table shows the count of visitors during the mentioned time. From an overall perspective, it is apparent that the number of visitors increased about 2000 after refurbishment, and the countribution of people who were very satisfied and satisfied reached to 75% from 45%.

The year before refurbishement, the total visitors of museum were 74000 that axactly half of them were not satisfied from museum, it means around 40% and 10% were disstisfied and very dissatisfied repectively. On the other hand, about 45% of visitors were in very satiesfied and satisfied category and 5% of visitores did not respond to the survey.

One year after refurbishment, the contribution of very satisfied and satisfied visitors increased by 20% and 10% respectively. Moreover, the proportion of visitors who were very dissatisfied and dissatisfied