BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS OF SEASONAL FOOD SALES AT BRISK CAFÉ

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The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The table illustrates the amount of money that college students spend yearly per capita. From a cursory examination, it is evident that country A students are leading in spending money with a margin difference in comparison to country C and a significant difference to country C with a total spend of 1500$.
To look closely at the data, it is considered that accommodation consists almost the most substantial porportion of their costs in A and B (45% and 35% respectively). However, it is ranked second in C where food stands first. Moreover, it can be noticed that books are account for the most insignificant cost in A with only 3%. However, this figure for C is near 20% which is high.
To mention more details, the percentages of leisure cost could be stated since they all care about hobbies almost the same and the figures demonstrated this point. In this respect, 22,23, and 12 are related to A, B, and C in respect. Furthermore, majority of B and C spend on stuffs that mentioned and only below 5% could be spend on other things.