BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS AND SUMMARY OF EUROPEAN ROAD TRANSPORT INFORMATION

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 4.5

The bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

Most of us love travelling .
But there are different ways to travel .
By your own car or bus ,train ,metro or even bike .
So here we want to talk people of some countries .
Which transporter do they like more ?
For travelling by car Denmark people are more interested in travelling by car.
Germany people seems that don't like car as much as other countries.
Italy and United Kingdom are almost the same .
The average of EU is between 10000 and 12000 kilometres per year .
About travelling by bus,train ,metro or bike people aren't that much interested in it .
But Denmark people are interested in it .
Other countries are almost the same with a small difference.
About communiting time United Kingdom and Germany have the highest record .
The average of EU is almost 30 minutes per day .
We all hope that in future we all become more interested in travelling by general transporters .